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04.25.2016
hike commented on a sound
Hey Martin,

I wrote down your lyrics so that it's easier to comment on them. Could you let me know if it's right and fill in the blank parts?

Lay your weapons down

Lay your weapons down (3)
Lay 'em down

I thought I died at war hunted down like a fox
by politicians in suits after Summit talks

Drink Champagne and shake hands, they can't feel her fear
Agree to build a fence and meet again next year

We look for superstars on radio stations
with millions on the run in other nations

Hear the cries (hear the cries) of those who are on their way
They may not reach the land where they plan to stay

chorus

well it's __ abuse by some fanatic Ice
They manage/too manic? to blame because they're on both sites

And a line of dropping bombs so-called defense
And let the people starve at the border fence

while the __ rape-abuse people on the run
the man he hunted down by men with guns

those who speak out their minds and wait __nightmare
of torture and __ dance on air
chorus

Solder's storming a town that they then dust in flames
With brave heroes __ best to claim

A woman on her knees cries "what have you done?"
This man you have killed was my only son

Is this walking the right way to bring World peace
or is this what we call the greatest disease

The girl speaks out her mind- this world shall be ours
Let weapons be replaced by beautiful flowers

Bridge: When will there be peace on Earth - I had a dream

chorus

I really like the theme of it. It's great.
Cheers! -
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[There is an audio upload with the melody] The flies on the screen know more about me than you doAnd the drops of rain falling on the ground make a more familiar sound than you do.We’re two strangers, it’s the vivid danger of time and distance passing by.I
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