| Stephanie Jackson: | ||
This song is lovely. It's uplifting, but at two minutes it's so short. It might be helpful for me if you gave me a breakdown of your intended song flow. I was trying to work in two verses before a chorus but it takes a little while to get to the punchy part of the song (:57). For me, the intro is too long. I feel like the song starts at :19 with the clicking. If you reworked the song I'd love to try again. I hope this feedback is helpful. Otherwise, it's a beautiful instrumental as it is!
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| 35 days ago |