Put my scars down in ink
Make them permanent but pink
Make it just a painted thing
Paint angel’s wings
Put my wounds into words
Paint a background full of birds
Rhyme my cries with pretty chords
Or they won’t be heard
I would make a lovely tragic muse
Give your pity pretty hues
Pour your color over all my blues
I would make a great Melpomene
Dripping tears and paint and honesty
Put a frame and a filter upon me
Oil painted tears still sting
Turn my screaming into singing
Paint my portrait as I sink
Among the weeds
Use my blood as ink
Or use it as the wine you drink
As you paint the next mona lisa
At least I hope at least I think
Make me your lovely tragic muse please
Make my tears a thing of beauty
Let me make it my duty
Make me some morose Melpomene
Hear my fears and find a harmony
Make what music you want of me
Overwhelming let me lie here
Let me pose please
Tell my story
Underwater let me die here
Take your notes please
Tell my story
Don’t be timid, make it gory
Give me back my angel’s glory
I would make a lovely tragic muse
Give your pity pretty hues
Pour your color over all my blues
Make me some morose Melpomene
Hear my fears and find a harmony
Make what music you want of me
Zane Kuchera: | ||
Your language is fantastic… “I would make a lovely tragic muse, give your pity pretty hues” - fabulous, it’s your golden phrase. Your phrases are rhythmic, fantastical, visual, and interesting. Fit for the stage. Well done you.
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