Nice!

Add some quick building background vocals to quickly increase the energy and/or change the tempo of the chorus and I think this'll fly up the pop and maybe the country charts!

Really good stuff, Paul!

Very cute with a little reggae in there! The background breathing works well.

This is ready for a cute, tongue in cheek kind of video.

The humor idea I'd recommend would be that the hero is being chased by someone trying to steal their energy. If you emphasize the reggae feel, I'd use voodoo as the theme and turn them into a zombie. Otherwise, you could go with aliens or vampires or whatever...

OK... I've listened to two tracks and I'm a fan.

Just an opinion, but if you increase the tempo on this, even slightly, this could be really big!

This needs a few background vocal tracks to add just a little more energy to it, but this sounds like it's about ready for air-time.

Very cool! Good luck with it!