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First Name:
Jarl
Last Name:
Westerouen van Meeteren
Age:
64
Country:
Netherlands
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About
Hi there, I write my lyrics in English though I am not an English native speaker. So I am open to critics and suggestions should a word or sentence isn't really right. I am looking for someone who can compose a melody on the lyrics together with a chorus. Thank you and hope to hear from you.
Songwriting Info
 
I am a:
Songwriter, Lyricist
Looking for a:
Songwriter, Composer
Genres:
Alternative, Blues, Country, Folk, Indie, Jazz, Pop, Singer/Songwriter
I'm strongest at:
lyrics
Instruments I write with:
guitar
Sounds like:
Myself I hope
Influences:
CSNY, The Smiths, The Beatles,.
Songwriting is my:
hobby, planned career
Collaboration Goals:
publishing deal, sync placement (film, TV, video games), niche/independent artist release
Lyrics

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Brussels Out with the band in Brussels I met you there We danced while they were drinking You said:ma cher! We did not go home We stayed till dawn                       My french was lousy, your english too We managed after brandies And walked the avenues
Jarl Westerouen van Meeteren · 1052 days ago
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08.10.2014
Jarl Westerouen van Meeteren now collaborates with Christian Welde
1050 days ago
Jarl Westerouen van Meeteren has updated profile information
1050 days ago
Jarl Westerouen van Meeteren now collaborates with Ben Gi
1051 days ago
Jarl Westerouen van Meeteren now collaborates with Ben Gi
1051 days ago
 
I hope that this conveys what you want to with your lyrics. I speak English as my first language, so I have attempted to edit your lyrics to sound somewhat smoother. So, perhaps you might try it this way?:

A night out with the band in Brussels
You so easily caught my stare
They kept on drinking while we danced
You called me by "Mon cher!"
With no wish to go home
We stayed out until dawn
My French was so broken
Your English was too
But this seemed to get better after brandies
So we strolled along the avenue
1051 days ago
08.09.2014
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1052 days ago
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1052 days ago
Jarl Westerouen van Meeteren has updated profile information
1052 days ago